Why- Please read and review

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  1. Jean1singer said:

    Post Why- Please read and review

    Ok, so here's another song I worte just today like 10 minutes ago I started writing it and I just finished. So it's more unlike he kinda stuff I usually write but I liked the tune I had to it and the lyrics. I know of course you can't hear the tune, but please review the lyrics, they might go on my bands demo and first cd. Also the genre of this song is acoustic and I will play the acoustic guitar for this song.

    Why
    By: Emm
    Album: Demo

    i'm scared of somethings
    not very surprising
    but I do them anyway
    just to break free

    like sitting in the darknes
    with no one around
    my heart is sinking
    and my ears start to pound

    ♥and all these wild dreams
    are barely contained
    no one would have ever thought
    that I thought about these things
    I don't know where i'm going
    but I know what I need
    not every wish is granted
    ecspeically not for me
    so why--
    do I---
    always look so happy♥

    oh-oh oh

    where is the moment
    we were supposed to wait for
    before we started thinking
    about where we are gonna go

    did I miss it
    and everything else
    why--
    am I like no one else

    ♥and all these wild dreams
    are barely contained
    no one would have ever thought
    that I thought about these things
    I don't know where i'm going
    but I know what I need
    not every wish is granted
    ecspeically not for me
    so why--
    do I---
    always look so happy♥

    like missing out on something
    regreting what I didn't do
    thats one of the things
    that I most don't want to do

    ♥and all these wild dreams
    are barely contained
    no one would have ever thought
    that I thought about these things
    I don't know where i'm going
    but I know what I need
    not every wish is granted
    ecspeically not for me
    so why--
    do I---
    always look so happy♥
     
  2. thischick said:

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    i think its pretty good. it would probably sound even better with the tune haha.
    i like the chorus alot.