Holding the world in the palm of my hand...

Thread: Holding the world in the palm of my hand...

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  1. x_kissedbyanangel_x's Avatar

    x_kissedbyanangel_x said:

    Cool Holding the world in the palm of my hand...

    So far I only have one verse and i need some ideas for the chorus. Thanks a lot

    Holding the world in the palm of my hand
    Every wish is your command
    Speeding through this highway of life
    But remember: everyone crashes and burns
    Sooner or later
    (change of tune)
    Then, all that I know
    Will sudden disappear
    Unveiling the demons within
    That will destroy me in the end
    And at that point in time
    I realize there’s no turning back
    So hear me out
     
  2. Jacobdatz said:

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    i think the second half of that would work good as a chorus
     
  3. x_kissedbyanangel_x's Avatar

    x_kissedbyanangel_x said:

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    Yeah, that would work. Thanks!
     
  4. Sewn Up's Avatar

    Sewn Up said:

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    I agree with Jacobdatz. The second half of that would work as a chorus. On the other hand you could use it as a pre-chorus. If that's the kind of route you want to take, then you could play around with the idea of pushing beyond mistakes you've made, acknowledging your past, and then trying to make things better for the chorus. I'm not sure if that's the kind of tone or message you were thinking of, but that's the kind of feeling I get from what you have. It's up to you though.