Voltaj - Tu (Corrections/Improvement)

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    maria_gr said:

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    I tried to translate the song Tu from Voltaj cause I like it very much, but I'm not sure if I translated well some sentences and the tenses of the verbs. Could you please check it and correct any mistakes I made? Thanks in advance.

    Tu
    You

    Au fost nopţi când işi dorea
    There were nights when i wanted
    să nu plec de lângă ea.
    not to go near her.
    Au fost vremuri când uitam
    There were times when i forgot
    tot ce-i promiteam.
    everything that i promised.

    Au fost zile-n viaţă mea
    There were days in my life
    când vroiam altceva,
    when i wanted something else,
    dar acum ştiu ca doar ea
    but now I know that only she
    e dragostea mea.
    is my love.

    Cine poate sa îmi dea
    Who can give me
    primăvară după iarnă grea?
    spring after a hard winter?
    Cine nu-mi spune niciodata nu?
    Who doesn’t ever tell me no?
    E atât de simplu, doar tu.
    It’s so simple, only you.

    Au fost nopţi când aştepta
    There were nights when I wait
    pâna-n zori să vin la ea.
    till the dawn to come to her. (?)
    Au fost vremuri când plângea
    There were times when I was crying
    din cauza mea.
    because of me.

    Au fost zile-n viaţă mea
    There were days in my life
    când vroiam altceva,
    when i wanted something else,
    dar acum ştiu ca doar ea
    but now I know that only she
    e dragostea mea.
    is my love.

    Cine poate sa îmi dea
    Who can give me
    primăvară după iarnă grea?
    spring after a hard winter?
    Cine nu-mi spune niciodata nu?
    Who doesn’t ever tell me no?
    E atât de simplu, doar tu.
    It’s so simple, only you.

    Cine poate sa-mi spuna te iubesc?
    Who can tell me I love you?
    Cine poate sa ierte când greşesc?
    Wo can forgive me when I go wrong (I fail)?
    Cine poate sa fie o viaţă aşa?
    Who can be a life like this? (doesn’t make sense)
    Cine poate sa-mi dea...
    Who can give me...

    Cine poate sa îmi dea
    Who can give me
    primăvară după iarnă grea?
    spring after a hard winter?
    Cine nu-mi spune niciodata nu?
    Who doesn’t ever tell me no?
    E atât de simplu, doar tu.
    It’s so simple, only you.
    Άνθρωποι τύχης είδωλον επλάσαντο, πρόφασιν ιδίης αβουλίης.

    ~Δημόκριτος~
     
  2. dya said:

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    Very well Congratulations

    Small corrections:

    Au fost nopţi când işi dorea
    There were nights when she wanted
    să nu plec de lângă ea.
    (me) not to leave by her side
    Au fost vremuri când uitam
    There were times when i forgot
    tot ce-i promiteam.
    everything that i promised her.

    Au fost nopţi când aştepta
    There were nights when she was waiting
    pâna-n zori să vin la ea.
    till the dawn to come to her. (?) (for me, till dawn, to come to her)

    => Ήταν νύχτες όταν περίμενε (αυτή)
    μέχρι το πρωί na έρχομαι σε την


    Au fost vremuri când plângea
    There were times when she was crying
    din cauza mea.
    because of me.

    Cine poate sa fie o viaţă aşa?
    Who can be a life like this? (doesn’t make sense)

    It goes like this: Ποιος μπορεί να είναι έτσι για μια ζωή / για πάντα;
    (Who can be like this for a lifetime/forever?)
     
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    Σ' ευχαριστώ πολύ Dya μου, να 'σαι καλά!
    Άνθρωποι τύχης είδωλον επλάσαντο, πρόφασιν ιδίης αβουλίης.

    ~Δημόκριτος~
     
  4. dya said:

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    Παρακαλώ