chorus' for on the edge of love

Thread: chorus' for on the edge of love

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  1. Jean1singer said:

    Default chorus' for on the edge of love

    wich is a better chorus for my song: on the edge of love? Wich one flows better and wich one works better and sounds better?

    ♥where you go
    who you are
    it don't matter anymore
    cause I know you
    i'm fallin in love with you
    can't help it
    trippin up, i'm stumblin
    on the edge of love♥

    or

    ♥where you go
    who you are
    it don't matter anymore
    cause I know you
    i'm fallin in, and i'm falling too fast
    trippin up, i'm stumblin
    on the edge of love♥
     
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    Ultimate_Worrier said:

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    I prefer #1
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