Describe the perfect place

Describe the perfect place
I found a quiet lake
Faces formed out of stars are looking down on the dancing waves
This seems like the perfect place
So why do I need so badly to escape
The faces are turning shapeless as if I’m here to take

Another day without any change
Me being this anonymous feels so fake
A quiet lake as the perfect place
So why am I waiting for the perfect escape?

This seems so surreal, even when I’m still here
It feels like an old memory too painful to reveal
With the faces changed to nothing, there’s no one helping me through
I’m just waiting for the waves to take me to you
I’m desperate for a wave that asks me to dance
To get my mind of my last summer romance
The old memory, too painful to reveal
Tell me how to avoid the feeling of loneliness, when it’s just too real

I’m trying to take things to another level
But I’m scared to disregard the fact
That I will be breathless in the end

I want to change things one another
But I don’t know what it takes
So I’ll lose my mind in the end

Another day without any change
Another day that looks the same
The stars are still changing their shape
And clouds are passing by
So they can’t shine tonight
But I don’t mind, no I don’t mind
Cause the stars seem different over here
I don’t mind if they disappear
Cause the stars seem different now,
Not so bright at all
But I won’t fall, no I won’t fall

It's good. I like it. It's pretty and flows very well.

thanks!
x

ik vind de poëtische touch heel mooi
een beetje jim morisson maar vrouwelijker