Here is my lyrics that I've written. Also you should mind the fact that I didn't write for a long time and I've got rusty. Please give me some feedback about your opinions and where I could improve myself.
Thanks in advance.
When I start writing lyrics
Only God knows what shall come
Don't think you'll find gimmicks
Cause I don't do this for fun
I'm trying to express my mind
And the thoughts that lay within
All those not interested
Should now take a spin and walk out
Because I don't have any doubt
My history isn't different from yours
It's just a bit sadder
Having a different childhood
Thank God things didn't got badder
Hate from within is the cause that kept me going
Seeing people laugh of me, all the words they were throwing
Trying to get me down and make me give up
But then, divine revelation suddenly lit me up
The mind started to change, getting more analytical
The knowledge I've obtained, from the books I've been reading through
Taken interest in the way of finding Truth
Connecting myself to God
Without the need of some demagogue priest
Telling me what to do and not
When I would be starving, and he'd have a feast
Leading people by their fear and uncertainty
Making them sinners while they are the sinful
Punishing unjust, for reasons unknown
But they hide it after the words of God
The sinless should be the first with their stones thrown
Nobody's throwing now, accusing for things I can't fathom
Because we're all humans, and in some way, we do all random
Not caring about your peers with a harder life than your own
Happy because you just escaped from their life style
And trying to forget them so you don't fall back down
Indifference may be a blessing, but not when it comes to helping
You've found a better way, then you should save people from drowning
In their own sorrow, because for them, there might be no tomorrow
Some last words ending these thoughts
Don't forget from where you came, and for what you've fought.
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