In the corner of my mind.

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  1. Saul_the_writer said:

    Default In the corner of my mind.

    Here is my lyrics that I've written. Also you should mind the fact that I didn't write for a long time and I've got rusty. Please give me some feedback about your opinions and where I could improve myself.
    Thanks in advance.

    When I start writing lyrics
    Only God knows what shall come
    Don't think you'll find gimmicks
    Cause I don't do this for fun
    I'm trying to express my mind
    And the thoughts that lay within

    All those not interested
    Should now take a spin and walk out
    Because I don't have any doubt
    My history isn't different from yours
    It's just a bit sadder
    Having a different childhood
    Thank God things didn't got badder

    Hate from within is the cause that kept me going
    Seeing people laugh of me, all the words they were throwing
    Trying to get me down and make me give up
    But then, divine revelation suddenly lit me up
    The mind started to change, getting more analytical
    The knowledge I've obtained, from the books I've been reading through
    Taken interest in the way of finding Truth
    Connecting myself to God
    Without the need of some demagogue priest
    Telling me what to do and not
    When I would be starving, and he'd have a feast

    Leading people by their fear and uncertainty
    Making them sinners while they are the sinful
    Punishing unjust, for reasons unknown
    But they hide it after the words of God
    The sinless should be the first with their stones thrown
    Nobody's throwing now, accusing for things I can't fathom
    Because we're all humans, and in some way, we do all random

    Not caring about your peers with a harder life than your own
    Happy because you just escaped from their life style
    And trying to forget them so you don't fall back down
    Indifference may be a blessing, but not when it comes to helping
    You've found a better way, then you should save people from drowning
    In their own sorrow, because for them, there might be no tomorrow
    Some last words ending these thoughts
    Don't forget from where you came, and for what you've fought.
     
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