Overwhelming ocean tides
Is what I still reminisce thinking about when our love was tied
A force that’s making me regret my goodbye
It’s drained off all my personal advice

I’ve got to escape from the rain
It doesn’t ease the sudden pain
Knowing they’ll be no change
And I’ll end up going back to when we felt the same

I’ve got to escape from the rain
My life’s not been the same
It doesn’t close off the hurting shame

Thought I could smooth
The bumps in the road from loving you
Where unexpected feeling just seem to intrude
And adding to the trail my heart’s created towards you

I’ve got to escape from the rain
It doesn’t ease the sudden pain
Knowing they’ll be no change
And I’ll end up going back to when we felt the same

I’ve got to escape from the rain
My life’s not been the same
It doesn’t close off the hurting shame

No barrier can hold back our love behind
Cracks expanding on what I feel inside
Can’t run away from these tempting lines
They keep on growing side by side

I’ve got to escape from the rain
It doesn’t ease the sudden pain
Knowing they’ll be no change
And I’ll end up going back to when we felt the same

I’ve got to escape from the rain
My life’s not been the same
It doesn’t close off the hurting shame

Too many rhyming couplets... Seems far too "trying too hard"

no, i think its pretty good keep it up

Originally Posted by Inconsolable89

no, i think its pretty good

Excuse me, my opinion is my opinion, not fact and I stand by it.

im sorry i didnt talk to you i cant see ur name in my post