My Drug

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  1. nomad915 said:

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    not finished yet, but i thought i would post to see what people thought so far...



    Everybodys searching for what they hope to find.
    Its always quite elusive, always on my mind.
    To dull the pain, to ease it, to make it easy to bear it.
    My thoughts no longer a secret, I would like to share it:

    You're my drug, my dream, my hope, my fix, my cure, my song, my
    heart.
    You make my days glow brighter, before they even start.
    I'm blessed to have you in my life, but if I could, I'd change it.
    If something in my world was stopping you from getting close, I'd gladly
    rearrange it

    Bring you closer, make you love me again, fix what I've done wrong, do
    it over again.
    Like a drug you make me numb, but give me such good times...
    I wish I knew what i had to do to make you mine.

    ..............................................
    and that is as far as i got
    *be honest whether you like it or not
     
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    Ultimate_Worrier said:

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    It's good but


    "like a drug you make me numb" ... A lot of drugs give you euphoria, not numbn ess
    * Difference of opinion is not argument, only difference.
    * Just because you don't like something, doesn't make it sh*t
    * You are all individual, just like everyone else.