Any advice I am trying take previous advice and make my songs more musical, am I having any luck?


I want you back:


Try to get away
Can’t stand to say goodbye
I am trying to live right
Don’t want God to see my sin


I want to do the right things, make God pleased with me but
I just can’t even breath , trying to live this life
Trying to live this lie. I try so hard to stay cool make everyone
Think I am fine but Inside I am just dying, but I have to make this life
Turn out right.

Chorus:
And choke back all the tears
Try hard not to give in
Have to stay so strong but I’m
So far gone

I want you back.
I want you back

I want to hold you in my arms
Want to say I did it wrong
But I can’t do that.
I’ll have to make peace with the pain
Can’t let the whole world know
How I messed it up so bad.

Chorus:
And choke back all the tears
Try hard not to give in
Have to stay so strong but I’m
So far gone

I want you back.
I want you back.

Does God see me cry, when I miss so you so bad.
Does he know I try to live my life so right
I try to live this life, try to live this lie.
I need time to hide, get away from the pain

Chorus:
And Choke back all the tears
Try hard not to give in
Have to stay so strong but I’m
So far gone.

I want you back
Oh I really want you back
I want you back.