Here another one of my songs. This is one of the few i can picture the melody to It would probably start kinda loud and then mellow out a good deal. So like the opposite of a lot of songs.

Just wouldn't Work


You said you don't know why you left last night
you act like I'm the reason
but deep down you know it's not

cause baby we started this fling
knowing we had to get back to school when it was all done
last night you realized it was day forty-eight

and soon we had to get on a plane
you heading back west while i went north

we both agreed it just wouldn't work
but last night it hit you
only three days left for me to hold you tight

(chorus)
just look at the light shimmering over the water with me

but then you started thinking about the future
I want to scream soon i'll be eighteen
But we agreed it just wouldn't work

So i just hold you close
and try calm you down

I yell the three words i promised
myself i wouldn't at the beginning of this fling

I love you
(Interlude)
Now that i love you i have to tell you
you cry harder but whisper in between

What will i do with out you