one to us

this is what it sounds like a love song not really sure what to call it and i feel like its not done but don't know what else to add or do

moon light in the window

us frozen in time

my arms around you making you mine

your smile fades i fall apart

your eyes see through straight to my heart

/i will love you no matter how far
swear from this moment wherever you are i will love you/

head on your pillow

hands held as we kiss

my heart has never pounded like this

wisper your name you wisper mine

our shadows softly combine

/i will love you no matter how far
swear from this moment wherever you are i will love you/

This is really romantic...

Like a song from my dreams, way to go!

4.9/5!
(One Point For Grammar)

thank you alot for the comments so do you think it needs anothere verse or no

k i feel like this song needs another verse like its missing somethin plz give your opinionon if it needs more and any ideas on what it needs would help alot thanks

yah it kind of does need another verse

ya but i am stuck not sure what else to add

if anyone has any ideas to help me wit a third verse plz tell me