This is a mellow fingerpicking one in D and C


A Lie

break me - you're not the one to break me
you're not the one to break me down

hurt me - you know that you never could hurt me
you know that you never could make me cry - it’s a lie

love you - you know that I never did love you
you know that I lied when I said it each night

hold you - you know that I don’t want to hold you
no I don’t want to hold you just for a while - it’s a lie

it’s a lie

Im a big fan of finger-picking, it can bring out a lot of emotion. I think you've got some good rhymes and a decent idea. Personally I think it would be a great improvement if you made it a little longer and a little more complex, but thats just my preference it may not be what you're going for at all and in that case you should stick to your guns.

Luck