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Well I'm not a songwriter or anything even close to that but I came across something I wrote along time ago and I was wondering if I could get some ideas how to make it sound better. Well here it is and thanks for everyone's input in advance!


All we are, all we need to be

You and me
It was not a lie
we both know
to this day
deep down inside
it was real
real as can be
it could have been fate

all we are, all we need to be
by your side is her and not me
we're only friends and it was never enough
but every time I saw you it's been rough
to hide what I really feel inside

That one flinch away from true love
you're my friend, my soul mate
connected forever in some strange way
you will always have a part of my heart
you helped me through without knowing your part
your smile made me go all the way
instead of dying I lived through every day
before it was too late
we said goodbye
you and me

all we are, all we need to be
by your side is her and not me
we're only friends and it was never enough
but every time I saw you it's been rough
to hide what I really felt inside

I miss your laugh that always cheered me up
the jokes that were out of place
the touch that I hunted, craved so much
You gave me the strength that I have today
Silliness brought us together
but love took us apart

all we are
and all we need to be

wow i loved it great job what type of music is it

Thanks so much! I'm not really sure what kind of music it will be. I have to work on that next ....

k well its really good i'm martin nice to meet you it fine the way it is but if i were to change anything i would have the first verse and the third verse end in a ryhme like insteade of

"You gave me the strength that I have today
Silliness brought us together
but love took us apart"

say

"You gave me the strength that I have today
Silliness brought us together
but love took you away"



you did that for the second and a good rhyme really reels people in but its good the way it is to

Nice to "meet" you. I'm Anna. Thanks for sharing your thoughts on it. I like the idea about the 3rd verse!

ya you can use it is this the only lyrics you have written cause your good you should read some of mine and tell me what you think