A Retard of Some Sort

I walk up to you
Just to pass you by
You look at me
And I give a sigh
You ask me a question
And I brush it off
You wonder if I lack attention

Am I a Retard of some sort?
Who can’t be social?
Does my brain not support,
The function of speech

I try to speak to you
Just to mumble nothing
You try to decipher it
And make it into something
You wonder why I stare at you
Looking like a fool
And why do I find interest in the things you do

Am I a Retard of some sort?
Who can’t be social?
Does my brain not support,
The function of speech

Do you ever wonder why
I always slowly pass you by
Do you ever wonder why
I always stare and pretend not to care
I don’t care
I try not to care
I think I care

Am I a Retard of some sort?
Who can’t be social?
Does my brain not support,
The function of speech

When I say Retard I hope people don't take offense to it or anything. This song isn't supposed to be a hate song towards retards.

Any suggestions, critisizims? (ha ha I know I spelt that wrong)

I don't really like the chorus... at least the retard part. I don't find it offensive, I just think that the fact that people use it so often to describe anything they don't like renders the line ineffective. Other than that, I think it's pretty good. It's definitely a relatable topic for many, including myself. Keep it up.

Any Suggestions for the chorus? To me the chorus really emphasis's the fact that the person in the song is always at a loss for words when trying to interact with the person he finds intrest in. Well to me it seems people will take offense to anything nowadays so I thought I should put that to stay on the safe side.