Find the Cure

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  1. jw92's Avatar

    jw92 said:

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    Find the cure
    Speak the words
    I am blinded by this sun
    Shining right in my eyes
    I am deafened by this noise
    Screaming right in my ear

    Pearl white, speak tonight
    Free me from this dark
    So I live on to see another day

    Don’t let the world
    Tear you apart
    We are the last ones fighting
    Leap through fire
    we’re gonna’ chase this falling star

    With no one on your side
    You here to ask questions
    With out a single answer
    Fighting this cancer causing tragedy
    My beds cold
    Where you used to sleep
    the sheets are torn
    Frame is worn
    From the frights I keep

    Pearl white, speak tonight
    Free me from this dark
    So I live on to see another day

    You kept this from
    Your heart of stone
    And I’ll find another precinct
    To keep my love lust locked up
    You kept me from
    Achieving my goals
    Redirect my fouls
    And find me a better way to live

    Pearl white, speak tonight
    Free me from this dark
    So I live on to see another day

    I wanna live again
    I wanna live to breath another
    Day and rest the night away
    I wanna live again
    I wanna live to breath another
    Day and rest the night away
    Please review and give feedback on my lyrics!
     
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    AloneAndTired said:

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    I like the song! I don't really have anything negative to say. I like the whole short, concise line thing you've got in it. It reminds me a bit of Feeder. In my eyes that's a good thing haha
    Good job though!
     
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    jw92 said:

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    Thank you very much for your feedback and for reading my stuff

    I'm glad someone likes it!
    Please review and give feedback on my lyrics!
     

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