This Apple is Bittersweet

The first completed song that I actually like. Most of my writings end up in the round file (trash). But I feel this one came out good. Please share your thoughts. Constructive criticism only please. Thank you. As far as genre goes, heavy metal all the way!! Oh and obviously this is a religious song, and I can only hope that I don't get ragged on for my christian faith. Enjoy!

THIS APPLE IS BITTERSWEET

Now the bitterness sets in
From the sweetest bite of sin
Can you feel it trickling down
the rotten core is now unbound
The fall of man has come to pass
We've forsaken our God so fast

Bite down
Remove his crown
And hide your shame
Hide your shame
Just hide your shame

Did the apple please the tongue
Would you have eaten more than one
The burning has consumed your heart
And you and God drifted apart
Now cough and choke and spit it up
And grab His outstretched hand of love

Reach out
Hold on tight now
And don't let go
Never let go
Don't you let go

bump.

mother f***** bump!!!! reply a**holes!!!