The Vile

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    Okay, second complete work. More on their way in the near future. So, for this one, in my head I hear this one being a poem being read over a backdrop of gloomy electronica scratchwork. Not too much of a straight up song, more of an intermission or interlude or something of the sort. Anyway, I'd love to read your thoughts on it. Enjoy!

    THE VILE

    forever staring into infinite nothing
    that fills your eyes with emptyness
    once you thought you heard something
    it was just the bitter taunt of happyness
    and you were too weak to reach out
    and grab the things you dreamt about

    now the void does divour your mind
    and a beast within is summoned forth
    and as it naughs you try hard to find
    closure in anything but there is only discord
    and the beast is raising high its head
    screaming that you are better off dead

    would you listen to it that through sorrow
    has come to possess where once you smiled
    and you try your hardest, but your hollow
    it seems nothing you do can destroy the vile
    your at the end of your breaking rope
    you think everyone wants you to go

    and He offered you his outstretched hand
    He told you that He is greater than the beast
    and as you grab His hand you understand
    that His pure love brings the vile to defeat
    it is hard for you to find yourself once more
    and when you do you feel stronger than before

    and as you walk hand in hand with Him
    your eyes now fall upon the beaty all around
    the beast is again tamed and locked within
    and now you can hear the most beatiful sound
    behold the angels that sing from the sky
    I'm glad you're happy and don't wish to die
    I thought what I'd do was, I'd pretend I was one of those deaf-mutes
     
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