Decadence

I'm trying to get a band together and I've wrote a few demo tracks on guitar. I'm not much of a singer, but I've decided to try and get some lyrics done, in case it all takes off then I won't have to sit through the tedious hours when we could be practicing haha
Please let me know what you think. It's about someone who recons my friends and I are crazy, but has these massive fits of anger, just in case that makes anything any clearer. It's called Decadence

As these white lies turn to blackened sin.
You have no regret.
No regret.
Another day and my patience is wearing thin.
I won’t sit back and let this happen.

And as I hold my tongue,
So many words come to mind.
I can’t say a word.
I think it’s time,
To leave.

We aren’t the patients.
We are the victims.
And this can’t go on.

You can’t hold your tongue,
So I will hold my breath,
And pray for an escape.
It’s caving in.
You’re closing in on me.

We aren’t the patients.
We are the victims,
But you can’t see,
You’re blinded because you want to be,
So unaware.

i would suggest trying to rhyme your words more.when you rhyme your words, it makes your lyrics more catchy and potent and it also makes your lyrics stand out way more.i use rhymezone.com it has been very very usefull to me.just a suggestion.