My Love. { Need an opinion }

im a dork..

the way I dress, they way I look…
still surprised she bit the hook…
im different, ‘n’ not cool…
unlike other people at school…
don’t see what you see in me…
but it makes me shout out in glee…

im your geek in tin foil…
not your knight in shining armour…
but I’ll save you anyways…
it’ll just be slightly harder…

I’ll bash the gym and get stronger…
then no longer will I ponder…
about what you see in me…
I will adapt…
and not wonder…

accept it, will I…
have fun slaying indie after indie…
if they twice look at what is mine…
maybe this is a sign…
of a better future…
full of smiles and laughter…
get a new nickname, an “ atta, nat-a... “ *london accent, relevant joke*

i'll protect what is mine…
but still allow you to shine…
then try to relax and not worry
because I trust you morgan…
and im not in a hurry…
ive proved that... *another inside thing*
and now I have one thing to say…
and its one simple word…
………………"love".

I love my girlfriend alot, and struggle to see what she see's in me...
this song helped me...

I really like the first two verses - kinda has the self-deprecating feel of Self Esteem (Offspring).

Verse two changes the story - now you want to change who you are - for her.

You totally lost me in those last two verses, though. Keep it positive and lose the "I'll protect what is mine" stuff.