Hello just wanna se what u think about my rap-lyric... Im not done whit it..

Feel free to comment what i can do whit the song !

my english is not the best sorry



There is one girl on this little earth, that make me feel like never befor.

I cant explain this love whit my words, it's not easy to say that i love you, but i have to !

My love is burning for you, i dont know what to do !

When i saw you first time, i catch you whit my eyes !

All i want to do is loving you.

You are my little sweet drug, i am addicted to you !

I have never feelt like this befor, since i meet you.

You maybe think that im stupid writing this song, but its my passion talkin' for ya'.

It's only one thing on my mind and, its you !

You are my air how can i live whitout you !

I love you i will allways do ... Thank you ..

Feel free to comment whatever you think about the song

I think it's cute is this your first poem?

I think the "thank you" at the end is a very nice touch.

Originally Posted by MGrace

I think it's cute is this your first poem?

Yes this is my first ever Thanks !

Comment !!! feel free to say whatever u think about this poem !

Originally Posted by ToSingThisSong

Very nice rap lyric. Where are you from, Yugoslavia, Serbia?

Well i was born in Yugoslavia but when war started me and my family moved to sweden thanks for that you liked my song