older song, and a personal favorite enjoy

What Children Fear

Tick tick tock
Hear the ticking of the clock
As you drift off to sleep
I'm the ice on your stiff neck
The shadow that never moves from above

Feel the heat of your fear and my presence
Your dominion of what the children whisper under misty breath
I'm the Boogeyman

As each grain of sand falls
Nightfall nears
All of the smiles
Shall turn into
Cold sweat of despair

Feel the heat of your fear and my presence
Your dominionof what the children whisper under misty breath
I'm the Boogeyman

As you look over your shoulder
Wondering if I'm near
Are you overcome with fear

Sleeping with one eye open
Will not save you
Can you feel the heat of your fear and my presence
I'm the Boogeyman
I will haunt your endlessly

very good ruinsoftomorrow i really liked it..

thanks for the comment, i'm trying to write more like this

cool..its kind of my writing style this too.. especially :

As each grain of sand falls
Nightfall nears
All of the smiles
Shall turn into
Cold sweat of despair

mmm,i originally wrote this to be a black metal song the more i read it, power metal would suit it better

yeah i think it suits better..