Give Me Strength

It took almost a month to complete this song. Let me know what ya think. thank you


It was late... when my father called......
I'm not well son.. can you come and talk....
I said yes.. Im on my way....
when I arrived he began to pray...

Give him strength... and peace within....
give him the wisdom...and set him free....
forgive... him for his sins... oh Lord I pray...
watch over him and keep him safe
Please....show him the way....
Thank you Jesus Amen

He looked at me... with a weak smile....
that prayer was for you son... I'm on my last mile...
I have faith in you... you'll see the way...
with tears in my eye's... I began to pray....

Give him strength... and peace within...
ease his pain Lord ... and comfort him....
forgive... him for his sins...oh Lord I pray....
Lord please... take his pain away.....
heal him with Heavely Grace
thank you Jesus Amen

He closed his eyes... could barely hear him say...
Im going home son....you will be okay...
look at the world...and feel their pain...
Heavens such a beautiful place

Give me strength... and peace within....
give me the wisdom... and set me free...
forgive... me for my sins.... oh Lord I pray...
watch over me and keep me safe
Lord please... show me the way......
thank you Jesus Amen

copyright 2009

Seems like you're aiming for a christian audience/person/type of lyric, not really my type, but I liked it . Sounds heartfelt.

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