Flying

I just finished writing the lyrics for a mini-album...so, i want to see how they sound.

I'm going to be translating them into Japanese, later on, so these are more like bare-bones lyrics. So I apologise for their plain sound ^O^ Please be kind!

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These simple toys, that broken clock
What a travesty of the world we pretend to understand
Your eyes glazed over with the voice thoughts of those so long dead
How you maintain sanity is a strange curious thing

Locked within a mind with no doors
Fall into the sadness of a thousand years of war
You cannot fathom this treachery THOUGHT OF DEATH

Sing forth from the tall towers
Your voice should be heard, lest you crush innocents under your weight
Your god will forgive you this one mistake, perhaps.
The red rouge paints the face of this landscape

This is how an angel feels
This is how the bird with broken wings flies
Does it feel good, the hot air in your face?
This world is revolving underneath you

These fragile toys, the broken flow of time
Come into my arms, broken child, and I’ll piece you together
Sewing together the mangled limbs, my precious suicidal doll
Those eyes have depth in their unseeing whiteness
This sanity is the burden you bear for eternity

Feel my hand brush so tenderly across your body
You know it’s too far away, that dream you longed to chase
But come into my arms and I’ll protect you from the nightmares
My precious blood-soaked suicide doll

I like it alot. Wish I could hear it in Japanese.

I liked it too.
Good job!