When I'm Gone

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  1. Schoonie01 said:

    Default When I'm Gone

    I guess i'm just tired of hearing all of my friends say that they like it because i always think they are doing it because they don't want to hurt my feelings lol. I'm not a pro so don't hate too hard.

    [Verse One]

    She caught my eye

    Just in time to watch me fall apart

    Behind a twisted smile

    That I’ve been holding onto for days

    She turned her head

    At the thought of what she’d done to me

    Held my hand and said

    “That’s not your smile anyway.”



    [Pre-Chorus]

    But I can’t complain

    She never says she loves me anyway

    Not anymore

    And everything’s changed

    Now there’s nothing left to say

    So what is she waiting for?

    “What are you waiting for?”



    [Chorus]

    I need to know

    You’ll be okay when I’m gone

    That you won’t live your life

    To the tune of this sad song

    Until the light of your life

    Can help you see

    To that one day

    When your memories of me

    Don’t leave you broken

    Anymore

    That’s all I’m waiting for



    [Verse Two]

    She made it just in time

    To watch me fall

    And she didn’t seem to mind

    It wasn’t her problem

    To save me anymore



    [Pre-Chorus]

    But I can’t complain

    She never says she loves me anyway

    Not anymore

    And everything’s changed

    Now there’s nothing left to say

    So what is she waiting for?

    “What are you waiting for?”



    [Chorus]

    I need to know

    You’ll be okay when I’m gone

    That you won’t live your life

    To the tune of this sad song

    Until the light of your life

    Can help you see

    To that one day

    When your memories of me

    Don’t leave you broken

    Anymore

    That’s all I’m waiting for



    [Bridge]

    ‘Cuz I can’t save your life

    Every time you fall

    Don’t count on me to wait

    When you fall behind

    If I’m gone

    So what are you waiting for?



    [Chorus]

    I need to know

    You’ll be okay when I’m gone

    That you won’t live your life

    To the tune of this sad song

    Until the light of your life

    Can help you see

    To that one day

    When your memories of me

    Don’t leave you broken

    Anymore



    [Outro]

    Don’t leave me broken

    Anymore
     
  2. .showmethelove said:

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    I like it, its nice.

    uh one thing- maybe work on the bridge. It isn't that it doesn't "work" but you could make it much better.

    Yeah you don't have to change that but yeah there's always room for improvement.
     

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