Needing a Name & Review

Okayy, basically im really upset with my best friend for being a nasty little ... anyway... i wrote this I'm in need of a name because this is probably the best i've wrote in quite a while. By the way, it sounds weird because I've written it in the style of my favourite band (Panic At The Disco, for any Hardcore fans out there.) Here they are !

I’m not gonna attempt,
To reconcile again.
Think of what you did,
F**k it, this is insane.
Trying to talk,
When people interrupt.
I’m a coward, I’m scared,
Or are You just corrupt.

Stop talking of new-found Fights,
Too sour to swallow but too sweet to say.
Tonight, tonight, you look like Shh…
Thoughts fade to grey,
Is this what you want.

I’ve never been better,
I’m wrong, I’m stuck.
I can’t go out without thinking,
What the F…
That’s when you,
Scream and shout.
Have you been drinking?
I believe I’m right
You’re beyond doubt.

Stop talking of new-found Fights,
Too sour to swallow but too sweet to say.
Tonight, tonight, you look like Shh…
Thoughts fade to grey,
Is this what you want.

Good, Good, now we’re concentrating,
But you refuse to listen.
Are you sure?
Are you sure?

Please don’t talk
Just don’t talk

Stop talking of new-found Fights,
Too sour to swallow but too sweet to say.
Tonight, tonight, you look like Shh…
Thoughts fade to grey,
Is this what you want.
Is this what you wa-nt.

Not bad. You've got pretty good structure throughout and it's not too complicated to read. Very easy to understand. As for a title, perhaps "Bittersweet Pill" because of the "Too sour to swallow but too sweet to say" line? Just a thought lol

Ahhh! That's a good name! And thanks for the review :] Im glad it wasn't bad I was expecting a lot worse ! Xoxox