well heres my first song ever written and wondering if it needs some improving.
[verse1]
drinking tea at a cafe
gazing at the sky
nothing stopping us from meeting
nothing standing in our way
[Chorus]
Love is like a rubiks cube
you try forever to find an answer
until you know the solution
and you never let it come undone
[Verse 2]
i wouldn't know what to do
if i ever lost you
your wonderful in every way
every year, month and day
[Chorus]
[verse 3]
if love could be a color
it would be those on you
i care about what you say
....(i need one last line here)
i know im not the greatest writer but i need to write a song for my music coursework and so it was the best that i could come up with. I'm open to any improvement on any line.
thank you