can you read my text and check it? please :)

sooo I amnot good in english, sooo i aksed you guys
could you read it and see is there are any mistakes


so here's my song:

I can't break this sorrow
that breaks me apart
i'm taking next step
but can't feel better now
teach me how to lose control
i'm maybe too severe
so rational is my breath
it keeps me away
from life that I always wanted to lead
how am I supposed to feel
when my life is just
an indictable offence

There's no place for me to stay
Walls suddenly stands everywhere
I thought I won’t have to be pretender
So bitter is my skin
So dry are my lips

like a moth
I make circles around chandelier
and light burnes my eyes
it hurts, it makes me blind

There's no place for me to stay
Walls suddenly stands everywhere
This world is against my will
This air is more heavy then a stone



I would leave this skin
But I can’t be somebody else...

for me there's any mistake, sure maybe ı'm wrong cause my english is not "good" too but it seem everything is right