New song, please read and review and feedback, thanks

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  1. drh521 said:

    Default New song, please read and review and feedback, thanks

    There’s sadness in your eyes
    Misery don’t mean a thing
    There’s poison in your kiss
    It burns when it don’t sting
    If I had any guts at all
    I’d bury myself into the ground
    If you any love at all
    You wouldn’t let me get that far

    Maybe life is just a lie
    Maybe hope will just bring you down
    Maybe happiness is in my stars
    Maybe I wear misery on scars

    I don’t believe in you tonight
    I don’t believe in words you write
    If my fate is in our hands
    Let me go its my last stand
     

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