wow i have not posted in a long time so here is a new one hope you like it


i said lets just leave getta ticket to anywhere
they say that were not ment to be but were happy why should we care
well let us be we can live on love
i dont need anything your heart will be enough
/hey baby ill see you through your darkest hours
dont burn out ill be the light
never have another
i need you like angels need the sky
like laughing lovers
like pretty girls need a knight/
i need you just as much as i hope you need me
but if i cant get the words out love its cause you make it hard to breath
we'll just leave why not tonight
to the stars i'll hold you close if your afraid to fly
take my hand love shut your eyes reach out and thouch the sky
/hey baby ill see you through your darkest hours
dont burn out ill be the light
never have another
i need you like angels need the sky
like laughing lovers
like pretty girls need a knight/
ya angel i need you in my life
like laughing lover
like pretty girls need knights
ya like a pretty girl needs her knight

niceeeeeee.

thanksssss

very good i liked it a lot! keep it up

thanks alot

Great! I like your style of writing where you get your message out there and fit the song around it. As opposed to each line being a measure of a 4 bar phrase.

I would switch this around though. From
Like laughing lovers to
Laughing Like lovers

by the way check out my posts:

New Writer Here, Feedback please
and
You and Me, Stuck

wow thanks for the feed back love it alot an ok i will