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  1. 4 shades of reason said:

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    Alone now your maskara like your heart bleeding

    Running down you face

    Barefoot on the floor

    longing for something more

    Then all this empty space

    /Behind her smiles everything you'll never understand

    Under her tears her broken heart stained by the foot prints of another man

    she screams most nights i still dream about him

    and its sad cause that makes the dreams where im dying the best i ever had/

    says i wish i knew his forever was not as long as mine from the start

    would not have let him push his fingers so deep into my heart

    finds it hard to see behind the wall he put up around you

    but there is a light she can't seem to find

    maybe its a lie i say maybe your not looking hard enough

    she wispers maybe im just blind

    /Behind her smiles everything you'll never understand

    Under her tears her broken heart stained by the foot prints of another man

    she screams most nights i still dream about him

    and its sad cause that makes the dreams where im dying the best i ever had/

    Alone in his lipstick stained shirt

    holding on to hope accepting the worst

    your tears traced bye maskara on your face

    crying i still dream of him will it ever end

    find it hard to sleep most nights

    kinda sad

    that makes the dreams where im dying the best iv ever had
     
  2. 4 shades of reason said:

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    this one is the next to be put into a song me an my band i really want feed back
     

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