Untouched (any feedback welcomed)

I only notice the hurt, pain and frustration
When I try to get close you lack of emotion
Shows, I don’t know how I’m supposed to react
When all you do is slowly turn your back

Do I make you proud?
When I could never live up to the expectations you have
Do I make you proud?
When the look upon your face makes me wonder is it that bad

Do you know how much you’ve left untouched
Losing the need to give affection and love
When you question yourself on what’s perfect
When the life you live now doesn’t represent
Who you used to be or who you are

I’m starting to see your patience becoming bare
As the silence begins to complete our stares
I’d ask how’s your day but would it make a difference
When you find yourself becoming cold and distant

Do I make you proud?
When I could never live up to the expectations you have
Do I make you proud?
When the look upon your face makes me wonder is it that bad

Do you know how much you’ve left untouched
Losing the need to give affection and love
When you question yourself on what’s perfect
When the life you live now doesn’t represent
Who you used to be or who you are

Worried as I make my way out the door
If there’s one thing for certain and for sure
You’ll be the one who ends up all alone
With your alcohol and cigarette smoke

Do I make you proud?
When I could never live up to the expectations you have
Do I make you proud?
When the look upon your face makes me wonder is it that bad

Do you know how much you’ve left untouched
Losing the need to give affection and love
When you question yourself on what’s perfect
When the life you live now doesn’t represent
Who you used to be or who you are

1st stanza, 2nd line - check your grammar.

"When the life you live now doesn’t represent
Who you used to be or who you are"
Do you already have a tune that these lines go in? If not, I'd suggest changing the second line to "Who you are or who you used to be". It sounds a bit awkward the other way.

^^ Good luck.

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