Storm of fear

Is it me or is it this place, I cant recognize my face.
Everythings black, theres no going back, the grass is no longer green.
Trapped between sanity and insanity, just wishing for a choice.
Theres no left or right, the only way is down.
Stuck in a freefall, theres a storm inside me.

Give me a choice, i need a voice.
No i dont, please dont say anything.
Give me peace of mind, give me back my life, I dont like this tide.
Too unclear, comforting words is what I wish to hear.
Tell me who, tell me where, help me cause im captivated in the storm of fear.

I am reborn.
With a new mind, a newborn kind.
Enlightenment or insanity, I dont know.
Im shaking, wanting to be awaken.
Wishing to be taken, by my guardian angel.
There is no who, there is no it.
There is only this, which i cannot explain.
how long can I substain before i start to fade.
my mind has been slain, leaving an unremovable stain.


Give me a choice, i need a voice.
No i dont, please dont say anything.
Give me peace of mind, give me back my life, I dont like this tide.
Too unclear, comforting words is what i wish to hear.
Tell me who, tell me where, help me cause im captivated in the storm of fear.

I like it It's really good and if you make it longer I think you can really get someplace.

this is actually really good and like *showmethelove* said make it longer and ya could really make a good use out of this talent. good job.