me versus you

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  1. We, The Seduced said:

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    I can hide all your fears, in sinew and bone.
    I can dry every tear that you cry, all alone.
    I can suffer these fools, for a week, maybe two.
    Until all that is left, is just me versus you.

    Then the sins of the flesh, are the only ones left.
    So each time that I leave, I have more to confess.
    I wish I could lie here and watch as you sleep.
    But I softly dissolve, back out onto the street.

    See I tried hard to breathe, with your love, dear, as air.
    Though each gasp that I took, left a little less there.
    But if all that I dreamed, all at once would come true.
    It would still just be me lying here, next to you.
    Last edited by We, The Seduced; 06-23-2009 at 09:16 AM. Reason: slight modification
     
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    chiQ said:

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    Nice - I like the last two lines of verse two a lot _b
     
  3. We, The Seduced said:

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    I slightly modified the end of the 3rd verse.

    Not that big a change, but I think it flows better like this.
     

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