My first song- Need some constructive criticism please

I just started playing the guitar a few months ago and last week I decided I would make my first song. I composed a simple but good sound first and just today managed to write some lyrics. It turned out better than I thought however I need a third party to judge them. Here it is, its called " A dream I had" ( It's a bit long I know).

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One Night….I had a dream
Where my love and I were together
We had…. a baby boy
And home was in front of the ocean

We…lived in a world
Where war wasn’t with us all
Where greed….was finally gone
And parents never buried their children

Chorus
Oh perfect dream
My precious dream
Tears in my eyes
You brought to me

Oh perfect dream
My Wonderful dream
Will you ever
True become

My love and I ….Were on our bed
Holding each other with all the strength
I touched her cheek ….She touched mine
“I love you” I whispered before kissing her

The world…was finally fair
And everybody was free
Free from the pain
That the games of politics and terror gave them

My ….son and I
Played on the streets without fear of terrible things
He grew older…and had his children
And around a Christmas tree we were all gathered

Around the world….everybody was the same
Enjoying and loving the gift of life
No pain….no lies
Living happily the dream that I had


Chorus
Oh perfect dream
My precious dream
Tears in my eyes
You brought to me
Oh perfect dream
My Wonderful dream
Will you ever
True become

I grew old….my time had passed
I closed my eyes ready to wake up
Life was perfect….everybody was
I wish I didn’t have to leave that heaven

My eyes were closed…I woke up
A tear I found running through my cheek
The dream had ended….or so I thought
Maybe one day the dream will come true

Maybe one the dream will come true

you got it recorded yet??

i really aint feelin this song but thats just me

this is just weird...
i mean, do these lyrics even mean anything to you?