Please review my song, I need some feedback.
i wish i could tell you, not to trust me
wish I could let you, in on a secret
but I see pain inside those eyes
and I can't count the tears you've cried
I don't wanna screw this up
I don't wanna let you down
but there's things that you gotta know
these... oh..
**I didn't know where your heart was
I never knew what made it beat faster
I couldn't tell you how I felt
it would only lead to disaster,
I didn't know what you thought about
I didn't know all I do now
I didn't mean to put you
in a situation that could hurt you**
I don't wanna let you go
but you don't even know
my hands still aren't clean
even though the blood stains are unseen
I can't let you in the life I lead
don't wanna make you this empty
(uh uh uh)
**I didn't know where your heart was
I never knew what made it beat faster
I couldn't tell you how I felt
it would only lead to disaster,
I didn't know what you thought about
I didn't know all I do now
I didn't mean to put you
in a situation that could hurt you!**
**I didn't know where your heart was
I never knew what made it beat faster
I couldn't tell you how I felt
it would only lead to disaster,
I didn't know what you thought about
I didn't know all I do now
I didn't mean to put you
in a situation that could hurt you**
now I lay my head on your chest
and I feel it move up and down
these thoughts enter my head
I can change, I can change
I will change!
just for you...