Untitled "i need help with the last 2 lines"

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    I, The Divine said:

    Default Untitled "i need help with the last 2 lines"

    CHORUS:

    How many times
    Have you pressed rewind
    Hoping for
    a Different result every time

    VERSE1:

    i once knew this girl
    she was my entire world
    she meant everything to me
    made my heart go on a shooting spree
    one night we went out on the town
    for a split second i turned around
    when i looked back she was on the ground
    not moving or making a sound

    VERSE2:

    as the car sped away
    there was nothing anybody could do or say
    i felt like it was all my fault
    had i not turned it wouldn't have happened at all
    everyday i take myself back
    to find out what made bad luck attack
    these thoughts keep me up at night
    causing my emotions to ignight

    VERSE3:

    as i watched my whole life fade
    the scenery faded away
    my sight consisted to black and Grey
    until my eyes zeroed in on my alarms display
    turns out it was all a dream
    it felt too much like the real thing
    ???
    ???
    Give.Music.Life.
     
  2. Morgan and FE2A said:

    Unhappy Needs some work!!

    Quote Originally Posted by I, The Divine View Post
    CHORUS:

    How many times
    Have you pressed rewind
    Hoping for
    a Different result every time

    VERSE1:

    i once knew this girl
    she was my entire world
    she meant everything to me
    made my heart go on a shooting spree
    one night we went out on the town
    for a split second i turned around
    when i looked back she was on the ground
    not moving or making a sound

    VERSE2:

    as the car sped away
    there was nothing anybody could do or say
    i felt like it was all my fault
    had i not turned it wouldn't have happened at all
    everyday i take myself back
    to find out what made bad luck attack
    these thoughts keep me up at night
    causing my emotions to ignight

    VERSE3:

    as i watched my whole life fade
    the scenery faded away
    my sight consisted to black and Grey
    until my eyes zeroed in on my alarms display
    turns out it was all a dream
    it felt too much like the real thing
    ???
    ???

    it is okay, but remember, it doesn't have to rhyme!