If you can review my lyrics that would be great! my plan is for this to be an upbeat jazzy song. Will be forever grateful for anything you have to say!

i pick me up on a gray sky
you wait until the day goes by
i walk the street with a baby's first step
even though i seem to have nothing left
you, you wound the city with your frown
leaving wilted flowers on the ground

oh i dont want to be blue
can't even risk to look at you
you may be sitting on a gold mine
and i may be walking on a thin line
still i'll live your life only when the sun forgets to shine
no way, i dont want to be you

sure i have my own rainy season
but i understand i only have them for a reason
at times Im a one man army
but at least i find ways to be happy
while you see only dark in the clearest of skies
i'm all smiles at my hundredth try

oh i dont want to be blue
can't even risk to look at you
you may be sitting on a gold mine
and i may be walking on a thin line
still i'll live your life only when water turns to wiine
no way, coz i dont want to be you

sure i have my own rainy season
but i know i have the for a reason

coz i dont want to be you
can't even risk to look at you
you may be sitting on a gold mine
and i may be walking on a thin line
still i'll live your life only when the sun forgets to shine
no way, never, thanks but i dont want to be you
still i'll live your life only when the sun forgets to shine
no way, never, thanks but i dont want to be you