The Effect You Have On Me....need criticism please!!

I hate how much I care about you
Always have and always will
How you carry around half of my heart
The half that nobody will ever fill

I hate how every time I look at you
You never seem to notice
How it seems like hours, but is only seconds
That I can never focus

Even more I hate you
And how the effect you have on me, you'll never know
But most of all I hate myself
For ever thinking I should let you go

I hate how when I think about you
I always want to cry
How those wonderful days we spent together
The images will never die

I hate how when I go to delete those photos
I always push cancel on the ones of that day
How we were both as happy as we had ever been
And how now my days seem so grey

Even more I hate you
And how the effect you have on me, you'll never know
But most of all I hate myself
For ever thinking I should let you go

I hate how when you walk by me
You'll never have a clue
About how much I want to call your name
And say "Wait! I love you!"

In my opinion , Think You Wrote that With a Certain Someone in your head because it seems Pretty Much Like a Story , i Even Played my Guitar to it , i Hope you like acoustic , if you want il Send you a Track to see if it fits
But i Love the lyrics man