king of misery

this a new one, kind of a dark hard rock piece, let me know what u think

Im dying, I hope you’re dying too
I think I’m fading, fading away
You hurt me, put me down
The bruises and scars line my arms
Medals of honor for a life less lived

I am the antichrist, the king of misery
I am the night , I will only bring you down
I wish I were someone else, someone like you
But I am me, and it’s the best I could do

Sometime past midnight, lying awake
Dreams of misfortune, and the lies they bring
Past lingers, haunts me through the dark
All the drugs don’t clam the pain
Try to forget but the memories remain

I am the antichrist, the king of misery
I am the night , I will only bring you down
I wish I were someone else, someone like you
But I am me, and it’s the best I could do

How can I like you when I don’t like myself
How can I love you when I don’t love myself

I am the antichrist, the crowned king of misery
I am the night, the darkness, the visions that keep you awake
I wish I could be someone, someone more like you
But we both know I was me, and that was the best I could do

I really like these lyrics! Very suited to the hard rock idea you have and they convey emotion well.
I particularly like the end of the song, especially that last chorus. I can imagine how it would sound being performed live, definately the sort of song that would give me chills. Well done!