why did she do it?

I promised her money
I promised her time
everything in my dieing heart could find
everything for passion
to protect my tender soul
promised to keep my secrets still untold

she swore shed love me for all time
how could she tell the story so untrue
continually useing her baby to get between me and you
all because her eyes reflect mine
my mother tried to warn me she'd try to break my heart

i am the condemmed
i am forever left dead
agony crying out in my already dead head
this isnt justice how could it be
i pray this punishment will let be

she swore shed love me for all time
how could she tell the story so untrue
continually useing her baby to get between me and you
all because her eyes reflect mine
my mother tried to warn me she'd try to break my heart

the truth no longer seems to matter
the truth seems to bring no closure
dont take comfort in my composure
because im crying every day
and i need to find the reason she leaves me this way

she swore shed love me for all time
how could she tell the story so untrue
continually useing her baby to get between me and you
all because her eyes reflect mine
my mother tried to warn me she'd try to break my heart


constructive feedback please thankyou.

any comments?

If this is personal experience, give it time man. Sitting at home writing poems is just going to make things worse. I'm deployed right now in the middle east n my chick left me via text while I was on the plane, so it could always be worse, haha. It's tough man, but you'll find your way, just get out and dont let yourself drown in your sorrows. Stay up.

cheers mate it aint real tho lol.

Haha. Good stuff.