verses (they are seperate songs)

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  1. Catch22 said:

    Arrow verses (they are seperate songs)

    I wrote these the other day and then didnt know what to do with them.

    Do you think these have any potential?
    What should i change to them?
    How should I finish these 2 songs?

    1.
    All we ever loved
    was the mask and the props
    you've worn them so long
    you dont know who you are
    why be at war with yourself
    take the real you off the shelf

    2.
    We're born an instrumental
    then we write our own words
    i won't be that one hit wonder
    of my generation
    but I am no copy wright
    I am my own creation
     
  2. katemasen said:

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    those are good! keep them! would love to see the rest of the songs I am sorry i don't have any suggestions though, I am here cause I can't write lyrics haha.