First song

{verse}
I know im not a perfect person,
Yea, I've been a jerk at times,
But is that really a reason,
To try and take away my life?

{Chorus}

Every single time I try to move on,
Theres always someone to knock me down,
And after a long long while,
You start to think you belong on the ground.
{Verse}
You've given up on humanity,
they say you dont belong,
And if you happen to feel the same way too,
Raise your voice and sing this song,

{Chorus}

Every single time I try to move on,
Theres always someone to knock me down,
And after a long long while,
You start to think you belong on the ground.

Its not finished.. and I know its not great... but what could I improve on? im only 16 and enjoy writing... thanks in advance.