I'm new to this site but I've been writing lyrics for a while now. Please be honest, criticism is wanted.

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I watched a cat kill a grasshopper today
not maliciously though, just in play
before it could hop or fly away
Curiosity wont kill her, despite what they say
I watched a cat kill a grasshopper today

I watched a man sell his soul to get away
from his problems, the American way
I always thought he'd come back someday
but he must have paid well, he made a clean escape
I watched a man sell his soul, he got away

I watched a boy trip and fall in love in May
brush himself off and was unafraid
even though she had to go away
he just put on his game face and boarded all those planes
I'm watching a boy fall in love everyday