Distance- my first song :P

Everyday, is not a shinny day.
I wanna see you, you set my soul fire...

(First Part)

Olden days... were funny days, i gave up on perfection-until that day came- the day that i met you.

Ill go the distance, my heart is focused on you, I was always searching, but now my hearts focused on you!

You are the one, i love i would do anything... to see you smile because you are my everything.
You are my dream, my dreams they are so childish if only they were true ohh, i could be with you.

Thank you Sophie, will you be my shining star... I would give it all to be, alone with you...

You are so true and you turn my world blue and that's why i will go-oh, i go the Distance...

(Second part)

Oh girl i truly love you, i know we belong together, oh i have-always been searching,but now i've found you and you have found me, i look forward to memories...

You are my star so bright, i would go so far, to see you shine because-there truly is no par.

You are my dream, my dreams they are so childish if only they were true ohh, i could be with you.

If i was smart-I would have found you at the start, but it's to late, oh well it was a mistake, but now you know... why i choose to go-oh, oh why i choose to go-oh, because i love you oh so, because the flame in my heart sends me the Distance...

I finished writting it today, it was the first time i ever wrote a song and it is very lovey-dovey.
The "-" shows the next word follows on quickly.
It will most likely be hard to read without knowing the rhythm but all comments are appreciated.

In my opinion, it's too cliche but that's just what i think. it would be better if there was a chorus to. PEACE!