Stargazing

Hi guys. My girlfriend's birthday is coming up so I'm trying to write her a song. I'm a pretty accomplished musician but being a bassist I have pretty much no lyrical experience so any constructive criticism is appreciated
Thanks and here goes:

Stargazing


Intro: AAA-F# F# F#-DDD-EEE
When’s this night going to start?

Verse 1:
A
Under the sparkling canopy
Em
We lie together peacefully
D
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A
But all the spotlights are on you

Verse 2:
A
Let the silence do the talking
Em
Cause beneath a million lights
D
No words could be as right
A
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Chorus: AAA-F# F# F#-DDD-G
AAA-F# F# F#-DDD-A
Lay your head
On my heart
We never need to be apart
It’s better than Paradise
Lay your head
On my heart
We never need to be apart
Nothing could be as nice


Verse 3:
A
There has never been a night
Em
Where all the stars were as bright
D
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A
But you still outshine them all

Verse 4:
A
There’s nothing to compare
Em
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D
Even where you had your scare
A
It couldn’t be more perfect



Chorus:AAA-F# F# F#-DDD-G
AAA-F# F# F#-DDD-A
Wrap your hand
In mine
We watch them all align
It’s better than Paradise
Wrap your hand
In mine
We watch them align
Nothing could be as nice


Bridge:
Just lie here with me
Just lie here with me
Until the end of time (bis)


Outro: A-Em-D-A AAA-F#F#F#-DDD-GGGA
Under the sparkling canopy
We lie together peacefully
but all the spotlights are on you



Thanks again

FrozenTurkeys