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i've never done anything like this before you know write lyrics let alone post them post...here's a simple little song i wrote just wanted to see what others thought...also be truthful if they suck let me know...thx.

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(Verse)

Whoa girl where you goin today?
Easy does it goes away

(chorus)

Now you leave me black and blue
What you said was oh so true
Punish me when we're alone
Amazing you've never slowed
Girl you make more than my heart explode
Yeah Girl you make more than my heart explode

(Verse)

Girl I swear I wont make a peep
Wont you come back we'll play for keeps

(Chorus)

Now you leave me black and blue
What you said was oh so true
Punish me when we're alone
Amazing you've never slowed
Girl you make more than my heart explode
Yeah Girl you make more than my heart explode

(Verse)

Please girl assume your place
I can't get enough of your wonderful taste

(Chorus)

Now you leave me black and blue
What you said was oh so true
Punish me when we're alone
Amazing you've never slowed
Girl you make more than my heart explode
Yeah Girl you make more than my heart explode

(Verse)

Girl why haven't you come back?
is it the feelings that I lack?

(Chorus)

Now you leave me black and blue
What you said was oh so true
Punish me when we're alone
Amazing you've never slowed
Girl you make more than my heart explode
Yeah Girl you make more than my heart explode

(Outtro)

Yeah you make more than my heart explode

Hey there! Pretty nice lyrics you wrote.. And the structure is original too Keep on writing them..

hey, thanks a lot!!! I will for sure...

i like it.