no name yet

Let me know what you think. I've never shared lyrics with the public before. I'm pretty quick to say if something is good or not but when it's my own creation i have an entirely different outlook. So thanks.

If only time would stop
For me it'd be right
Right for everyone

No where to run
No where to hide
It'd be as if I died

If only time would stop
For me I'd be safe
Safe from all this pain

You couldn't follow
I'd close my eyes
It'd be as if I died

If anyone wants to suggest a name be my guest.

Preettyyy nice,, now you just have to write some more sentences.. And the title could be ''If only'' or ''As If I died'' But that depends on you of course..