What do you think comment please !!!!!!!!

THi sis the start to my new song

Recently, things are starting to change.
Everything is starting to re-arrange.
My thoughts they still stay the same.
That my heart is still with you.


The world around us is going so fast.
Leaving many friends in the past.
No matter what one thing will last.
That my heart is still with you.


I believe that every moment counts
Every second i spend, should be spent with you
I believe in forever with love
I believe in forever with you
If you have to go and this has to end.
The seconds we spent were not pretend
I will come find you to start again

hmmm.... how about this for a chorus,
stop this train
i wanna get off and find you again
i can't take the speed it's moving at
can't we bring back
bring back that love we had
won't someone stop this train