Spell of Summer

Hey guys. I wrote a song about a summer romance called "Spell of Summer" so I just want some feedback. Let me know what you think.


Three months ago, I felt it
Experienced the beauty
My heart, you know it melted
From the love given to me

And it's so hard to describe
How I got sucked into it
But I just felt so alive
You'll know when you've been though it

CHORUS
It's the spell, the spell of summer
Captures you, and pulls you under
Yeah, it fills your mind with wonder
Sometimes it's hard to breathe
And it satisfies that hunger
Makes you thankful that you're younger
It rolls over you like thunder
You've never felt so free

Those feelings were consuming
They crept up on me so fast
And the love that was blooming
Yeah, it Was supposed to last

But everything fades in time
And leaves you empty-handed
Thinking back to you and I
Sometimes I just can't stand it

CHORUS
It's the spell, the spell of summer
Captures you, and pulls you under
Yeah, it fills your mind with wonder
Sometimes it's hard to breathe
And it satisfies that hunger
Makes you thankful that you're younger
It rolls over you like thunder
You've never felt so free

BRIDGE
Those memories that linger
Are slipping through my fingers
Then the summer sun is setting
That's when you start forgetting...

(CHORUS - replaces original "spell of summer" chorus)
It's finally October
And the spell of summer's over
The days grow even colder
They're just like you and me
Time for hearts to get sober
And return to their owners
Yeah, maybe when we're older
We'll actually believe...

Wow that is SO good!

Thanks! I was starting to get nervous! haha. 38 views and finally, someone says something! But thanks a lot. I've written a lot of stuff (mostly unfinished) but this one came to me really quick and I think it's probably one of my favorites.

Yes, I really like it =)

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