Hello guys, this is my first post and I just wanted to share with you this song I wrote a couple of months ago. Any commentaries are welcomed! Thanks
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When Anything Breathing Sleeps And Dreams

I kept no memory of your voice or face
But I still feel your shadow over my body late at night
When anything breathing sleeps and dreams
I cannot sleep or dream anymore, love
I forgot how your laugh sounds like
And I think I forgot how to feel anything, for anyone
I’m cold inside but I warm myself with memories
That’s all I really got, that’s all there is

Keep the distance, keep the miles
I’ll keep the smiles I can’t recall
Keep the words, keep the sounds
I’ll be around fixing it all (x2)

I loved you when I didn’t know what love really was
When I didn’t know what words could do to you
I was young and I was easy and I was ready to be broke down
And I learnt you get the grey if you water down the blue
And your heart it is not yours, it’s anyone’s who’s to take it
Bodies slowly root because of all the steps that we’re not making
This mouth tries to speak but fails to do so every time
Cause each time I move my lips, my tongue’s numb and I succumb
But I still feel your shadow over my body late at night
When anything breathing sleeps and dreams
And everything’s alright, everything feels right

Keep the distance, keep the miles
I’ll keep the smiles I can’t recall
Keep the words, keep the sounds
I’ll be around fixing it all (x2)